Continuing from Steve Irwin 14...

"Now you die!" says the doctor who's a dinoman.

"Get off of me!" Steve cried, kicking the doctor off with his feet. The doctor was tossed into the ceiling. From there, he got angry and transformed into a T-Rex.

"NO ONE HURTS DINODOCTOR!" he cried.

Suddenly, the doors to the room burst open. In comes the Galactic Defenders. Hermione is still unconscious and is being held by Ron.

"There you are!" Nessie cries. "We thought you died when you vanished into thin air because of DinoDoctor's ray gun!"

"Die you freak!" Mantis shouted, firing a bunch of screws into DinoDoctor's face.

"Argh! I'll have my revenge!" DinoDoctor roared, vanishing into thin air with a poof.

"Where'd he go?" Orca stuttered.

"Quick, into the new Galactic GoKart!" Bigfoot yelled.

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They all piled into the Galactic Gokart

"ROOOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR! NOBODY ESCAPES DINODOCTOR!!" Dinodoctor roars, he then reappers begins to chase after the Galactic defenders

"Step on it! he's gaining on us!" Bigfoot yells at Mantis who's driving

"It wont' go any faster!" Mantis Hollers back

"Harry! use your wand! do something!" Ron yells

"I can't! I don't have my spell book!" Harry screams, Dinodoctor catches up and picks up the go-kart

"I'VE GOT YOU NOW!! NOW YOU DIE!!"
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Hermione is still uncon- for pete's sake will someone wake her up!!?!

This post has been edited by Babysealz010 on Jan 19 2004, 11:41 AM

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Hermione wakes up "Wha...What's going on"

"Well, this one guy called Dinodoctor...

This post has been edited by Unicornz on Jan 19 2004, 05:46 PM

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"ROARRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!" Dinodoctor roared behind them.

"Run!" Steve cried, leaping off the GoKart.

"Where are you going!" Nessie cried, as the GoKart sped past Steve.

DinoDoctor ran past him and continued to chase the Galactic GoKart.

"BRRROOOOAAAARRRR!" he screamed again.

A foul stench filled the Galactic Defenders' lungs. Hermione was knocked out cold.

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"Not again!" said Ron, looking at Hermione

Dinodoctor turned bright red "I never should have eaten those beans!"

Phoenix flies in "Sorry I'm late, what did I miss. Whats that smell?!?"

"It's...

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"Not again!" Ron said picking up Hermione

"Blaugh! what is that stench?" Bigfoot said holding his nose

"BUUUUUUURRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOS!" Dinodoctor scream

"I think I'm going to be sick!" Nessie screams

"RUN! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! RUN LIKE THE WIND!" Steve screams

"Steve, shut up and get in the Go kart!" Mantis yells pulling him in the kart
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......."I don't care what you say! get me the biggest ship you've got! I'm going to destroy Steve Irwin and the Galactic Defenders!"

the voice of a new evil arises from the planet Groblestoopergooben.......................

Edit: Darn you Unicornz! you stole my idea!! and you got there before me

This post has been edited by Babysealz010 on Jan 19 2004, 06:00 PM

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Meanwhile, in the secren Irwin base....

"We need to figure out whos behind all this!" exclaims Steve

"Dinodoctor" says Nessie "What are we going to do about him?"

"Will someone wake Hermione up?" asks Ron

Yeti suddenly says "Why dont we just...

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"ARRRRGGGHHHH! I SHALL HAVE MY REVENGE!!!!!" Dinodoctor screamed, he charged after the Galactic Defenders

"Get me outta here!!" Bigfoot scrambles away under a rock

"Get back here! why are you running over there?" Yeti yells "Get in the go kart"

"Oh for the love of Neptune!" Mantis says, he gets out and heads towards Bigfoot, suddenly there's a huge boom in the sky, a large red ship flies down from the sky, it crashes into a huge tree right above Mantis and Bigfoot, the tree starts to crack in half

"Watch Out! the tree's gonna fall! " Nessie calls, the tree starts to fall Bigfoot scrambles out of the way of the tree but Mantis doesn't get out of the way fast enough......... the tree lands on him!!!!

"OH NO! MANTIS!!!" they all shout

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then...Mantis gets up and says "I should bust a (muffled by noise) up in his (muffled by noise)..."
"Ohh thank higher being you are all right" says hermoine
"who is that?" askes Steve
"Ohh no it is Pheonix! And he has... Sopeenas (did i spell that right)!" screams Bigfoot " For copyright infringement!"
Everyone glares at Hermoine and Ron. "Sorry Guys..." they say in a remorseful tone

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"Who's in the red ship that crashed into the tree?" Yeti asks, suddenly a huge Arnold Schwartzzeneger (Spelling) type person gets out

"WHATS THE MATTER WITH YOU??" Bigfoot screams at the big man "YOU ALMOST KILLED OUR BUDDY MANTIS!!"

"Don't yell at me!" the big man squeaks as tears spring to his eyes "I have feelings too you know!" he walks over to Hermione and casually picks her up, puts her in a sack and swings her over his shoulder

"NOW what are you doing?" Mantis says

"I'm taking your wizard friend hostage, according to the "Idiots guide to being a villan" taking one of your enemy's friends is the best way to take over the world and after that you......um...... you um, well I haven't gotten past the part but-"

"You laugh maliciously after revealing your evil plot" Nessie says rolling her eyes

"Oh okay, Muahhaha, Mwahahah! Ha ha muahahaha!"

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*Pow!* The beginner villain is knocked out and Hermione, who had been landed on by the unconscious villain is now seeing stars.

"Wow," Hermione said, pointing at the sky. "They're so pretty! Hey look! It's the North Star!"

Mantis stood over Hermione and looked up. "Ahhhh! My eyes! They're burning! The sun is in my eyes!!!!"

"Blimey Hermione! I didn't know stars came out at day!" Ron said, staring eagerly into the sky.

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"I guess we shouldn't take intelligence from a book very seriously anymore" Nessie whispers to Mantis watching Hermione and Ron yelling about stars

"WAIT WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING!?" the big man yells "YOUR SUPPOSSED TO- um," he flips through the pages of his Idiots guide to being a villain "Oh yeah, your suppossed to bow down to me and surrender"

"But you haven't done anything" Nessie says

"Oh, well I'm going to....... sometime soon" The big man says flipping through the book again

"Your supposed to reveal your evil plot, laugh maliciously for ten hours, and then pull out a weapon so we'll surrender to you, thats how all the other villians do it" Nessie says shaking her head

"Yes, but this version's from 1965, and it clearly states that-"

"Stop! your confusing me!!" Steve screams, he throws a bag of marshmallows at the big man

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( My first atempt)
Schwartzzeneger screams in a high pitched voice "IIIIIiiiiieeee....NNNOOO, NOT THE RAT NOT THE WHITE RAT!! PLEASE MISTER WATSON, NOT THE RAT!!!!!"

"What are you talking about?" Nessie says with a puzzled look

ron and hermione ask schwartzzeneger "I like stars, do you?"

"All my life has been one emotional trama after another!" the big lumax crys, " First that rat scares me at my uncle Watson's house, then those movie people hound me over and over, I thought I'd do good at politics if I just became a bad guy" he sobs"Why me!"

Suddenly Dinodoctor comes throught the trees and bites the poor guys head clean off.

"Eeep" Yeti falls to the floor unconcsous and so do hermione (what's with her today?)

"FE FI FO FUM, I SMELL THE BLOOD OF AN ENGLISH MON" yells Dinodoctor

"Wrong story" Nessie says, rolling her eyes.

"O, Yeah......RRRROOOOOAAAARRrrrr!!!!!!" Dinodoctor lundges at them all

"Has anyone seen my stuffed walla....."steve sees the dinodoctor running towards them".....by......" he squeaks

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Not bad for your first try BTW, the guys name isn't actually Schwartzzeneger, that's just what he looks like, nobody's givin him a name yet
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For some odd reason, the beginner villains head gets reattached to his body
"BROOOOAAAAAAARRRRR*cough* cough*RRRRRRR!" Dinodocter screams, all the galactic defenders hop into the Gokart except for Hermione

"Begging your pardon, but would you like a cough drOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!! AAUUUUUGGGHHHH!!! HELP MEEeeeeeeEEEEeeeeEEEEEeeeeEEE!!" Hermione screams as dinodocter shakes her around in his mouth like a dog with a chew toy

"Blimey Hermione!" Ron says excitetly "You weren't suppossed to help him!"

"Ron! get back in the gokart!" the Galactic Defenders holler

"What about Hermione!" Bigfoot shrieks, suddenly, Dinodocter spits her out and she lands in the gokart

"Steve! where's the teleportation device?" Nessie asks

"Oh no! I left it back at the White House!" Steve yells

"We have to go get it!" Bigfoot screams

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They drove off
Dinodoctor stepped in front of the go kart "I WILL...."

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